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【原创】七绝·游春荡秋千

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2013年04月07日 - 江雨霏霏 - 江雨霏霏心灵芳草世外桃源

杨柳风轻却余寒，

莺飞草长醉婵娟。

秋千荡落廉纤雨，

轻透罗衫犹自闲。

拙笔村夫友雅和

满院熏风暖嫩寒，
青桐树下戏婵娟。
濡衣香汗犹洇雨，
未使秋千一刻闲。

(仄)仄平平仄仄平，(平)平(仄)仄仄平平。(平)平(仄)仄平平仄，(仄)仄平平仄仄平。

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